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And here again we sit in silence;
The words unspoken but deafeningly clear.
The question hanged, drawn and quartered
Resurrected for your agony, my fear.

Am not able to explain my confusion,
This ineffable beast that guards my heart.
Teeth crush the sentiment out of its meaning
Leaving you bleeding and me torn apart.

No matter how many times we conclude
The ring, everlasting, circles again
To broken hearts and raging passion
To empty words, forgotten friends
©2005-2009 ~mooseywench
:iconmooseywench:

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This will make sense to some, none to others. And will really mean something to one.

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:iconbutter-stix:
is it just me or is your poem about a funeral. and if it is it makes me sad. and if it's not them i'm just dumb and still sad. it deserves a :+fav:.

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Live today like there's no tommorow and never think of yesterday
:icondepleted-sanity:
The only thing I regret about the poem is its length..
Should it be longer, I'm sure its worth would soar. Then again, perhaps it's not meant to be longer.

And rest assured. It means a lot to other people as well.
~K

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We are not human beings having a spiritual experience, but spiritual beings having a human experience.
:iconmooseywench:
:) thankyou guys, its about alot of things, it can be seen in many ways. It is meant to evoke a sad feeling because thats what I felt to write it :)

I was thinking of making it longer, but I said what I wanted to say right then in those 3 verses. I didn't want to write for the sake of writting, but with real feeling instead :) :hug: thankyou for the favourite!!!! :cuddle:

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'Small Minds In Shallow Times Can't Define The Pure, Divine'
:iconaudacious-mind:
it reminds me of my song, where friends suck lol

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Super perfundo on the eve of your day
:iconmooseywench:
hehehe :P

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'Small Minds In Shallow Times Can't Define The Pure, Divine'
:iconjacquelynann:
This piece , as has already been stated, is really sad but i must commend oyu on your brilliance in portraying those emotions in such a beautiful way. The metaphors physical pain used to express the extremity of the emotional turmoil is what makes this poem what it is. A brilliant piece.

Also I believe that the lenght suits this poem just write. We all know that as poets we must stop when the poem tells us to, when it has said all that needs to be said. :)

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"Restlessness is always driving me, and i cannot help it" - Charles Dickens.
:iconiza1502:
WOW, what a great poem, i feel like i can relate to this really well, and theres nothing better than a poem with meaning that is felt by others

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:rose:
I wish i could be free of all this pain and misery

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